Which revision corrects the punctuation errors in this complex sentence with two dependent clauses? We picked these apples, when we went upstate which was on Tuesday. Remove the comma after âapplesâ and put a comma after âupstate.â Leave the comma after âapplesâ and add a comma after âupstate.â Remove the comma after âapplesâ and do not add any other commas. Remove the comma after âapplesâ and add a comma after âwas.â